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With sweetened words spoken, lips met.
Entry for #SixWordStories's contest, "Open Theme Contest".
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Wow. I love this. Just six words speaks so much. The title, "Not the Same" brings an equally strong impact as the words themselves do. Anylizing the poem (because I see it as both a story and a poem), it brings such a vivid image to my mind. Two lovers speak those words and then kiss. But, as the title suggests, it's not the same as, perhaps, it used to be with them or with another love. Overall, this is amazing. The origingality lacks slightly, only because the kissing aspect is cliche, but you deleivered the image with tremendous effectuality. Great job.
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So romantic!
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xxDreamDealerxx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks :meow:
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